Thoughts, comments, etc. on post-instrumentalcoreorsomething

[Jeds7800]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4839006/Nautilus.mp3

Just wanted some input on the mix I've got here. I already know the bass is pretty bad, though haha. Also, I've been mixing on headphones, so I'm concerned about the overall low end. Too much or little?

 

[GearMan2point0]

get some monitors haha, they make it soo much easier. and as far as the bass, I think it sounds a little muddy and "moo-ey?" haha
I like the song though

Edit: needs glue

 

[Jeds7800]

Tried to make it a little better. http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4839006/NautilusII.mp3
Still probably moo-ey, haha.
Thanks, though.

 

[GearMan2point0]

yeah a little moo-ey still, what do you record bass with my friend?

 

[Jeds7800]

It's just a pitch shifted guitar so I don't think there's much I can do with it. I'll just have to wait till I get a real bass up in here.

 

[GearMan2point0]

oh snap, i had that same problem for a while. I just recently bought myself a bass.