Thrown to the sharks...snippet of a song im working on. feedback please :)

[Monsterbash333]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/29987738/Sharks.mp3

Let me know what you guys think


EDIT:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/29987738/Sharks edit.mp3

 

[perskurkkana]

The kick is very boomy in the sub-lows. Mix needs a lot more low mids IMHO, sounds kinda weak down there. The definition of the bass is lost. Guitars sound fine to my ears. I don't like the panning of that crash around 0:10, it's too centered.

Otherwise, it's great!

 

[Monsterbash333]

thanks man! i already started to work on the kick !!

 

[OneDaySky]

Snare Blasting sounds too robotic, are you using a single velocity sample?

 

[ahjteam]

The kick is very boomy in the sub-lows. Mix needs a lot more low mids IMHO, sounds kinda weak down there. The definition of the bass is lost. Guitars sound fine to my ears. I don't like the panning of that crash around 0:10, it's too centered.

Otherwise, it's great!

pretty much what I said earlier to Eli in FB:

- Pumps way too much
- Low end is way too boomy
- Bass guitar is way too undefined
- Mix sounds very muddy and dark

 

[Monsterbash333]

Snare Blasting sounds too robotic, are you using a single velocity sample?

most of the time ya :? ill get on that

pretty much what I said earlier to Eli in FB:

- Pumps way too much
- Low end is way too boomy
- Bass guitar is way too undefined
- Mix sounds very muddy and dark

and i took this to mind, ill be cautious to stay away from this next time. thanks for the feedback duder

 

[Monsterbash333]

edited posted