Title Fight/Daylight style band

[xTomx]

My ears are dead so I need yours!

Obviously the vocals (and lyrics) are pretty bad but any pointers or criticism would be welcome.

All real, no samples, amp sims etc.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/3809498/Missing You Mix 1.mp3

 

[phoenix18]

love that lo-fi sound but HATE HATE HATE that snare, try to raise 8k and clean up lower freqs, get rid of boxyness and i would probably turn the body of snare (100-200hz) down a db or two. Oh and more compression on snare.

 

[xTomx]

New mix:

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/3809498/Missing You Mix 3.mp3

Made things a bit punchier, added more low-end, compressed the drum bus a bit more and made the vocals more up-front.

 

[xTomx]

Newer mix:

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/3809498/Missing you Mix 5.mp3

 

[xFkx]

seems to raw and dry, even for this genre