Tone - rate the beginner

[Limak]

Hey there, check this out:
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Sorry for sloppy playing/crappy tone, im very beginner, just started to learn about this stuff, constructive criticism welcome alot!

Btw first post on this forum, hello all!

 

[elmoe]

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[Limak]

should work now, if not heres alternative link:
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[zvish]

should work now, if not heres alternative link:
http://www.wrzuta.pl/audio/8eGecqMwgA/

totalnie nierowno nagrany pierwszy riff ;P dramatu nie ma, tylko brzmi to troche tak..perka sobie gitary sobie kombinuj dalej ziomus a bedzie cos z tego
pzdr