Trying out some shit in Cubas I've never done before.

Dude, I can't get over what a phenomenal player you are, and these solos kick an especially large amount of ass - great phrasing/melody, and while the timing on the slow parts could be tightened just a bit IMO, the performance is otherwise stellar; great job!

Mix sounds good, and I like the synths pretty well; the pad works, though the lead thing is a little too thin sounding for my tastes. I know DICK about synths in terms of tweaking, so I can't give any more suggestions than that, sadly :erk: Cool song too!
 
Oh, one thing I do wanna mention is the upper harmonics of he attack on the bass is a bit distracting, I'd tone it down a bit - and while it's definitely a 5150 for better or for worse, the guitar tone is really good (sounds like great mic positioning and tweaking), so killer job there too!
 
Loving the title, one of my favorite quotes from Penn!

The song is indeed cool! Tight playing, and good tone! I agree on the synth tone being a bit "thin" on the lead stuff but I know dick about synths so can't help any there! :lol:
And I just got to the solo, and damn dude! You got some sweet chops. Nice vibrato, and like mentioned phrasing is sweet!

One thing that I would do is maybe work more with layering/synths pads for some parts since the mix can get a bit empty at times without it. When it all comes together it's great, but when it's not there it just gets a bit thin. Maybe that's space for vocals, I don't know! Drums sound great aswell, no comments there!
 
Thanks guys! :)

I'll fuck with trying to thicken things up. As for the sparsity of the "verses" that's where voculars will indeed go.

Thanks for the input on the bass dude, I was on the fence with that and will try and lessen the cochlear rape that they emit.
 
Yeah CK this jank is tha bomb! I love the synth stuff. And your chops make me want to go to my bedroom and woodshed for a couple hours haha.
 
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My little brother playing the keys wrote this song actually. I just played all the guits and mixed it.
 
And what are those things shaped like a penis and balls at the left side of the base of the mic stand? For the life of me I can't figure out...
 
Those "clothes" are actually my bedroom in the other room (where the amp is.)

As for the schlong-eroo. That's just a cchance image created by a bicycle pump and two straps for a bike rack ha ha ha. But on that note, the dick looks like it's aimed at the lady's mouth, which is that small image at the end of the schlong.

NICE FIND I bet you PWN the easter eggs in XBOX LIVE.