Trying to develop my own sound/genre (prog metal, film score, post rock all in one)

[jsaudio]

hey guys trying to develop something that is my own kind of sound lately not finished with this track but let me know what you think i havent laid bass but you get the musical idea.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/9463730/EPIC TRACK AAE.mp3

 

[oroinvictus]

Snare needs to go way down, and the guitars need to come up. You HUGELY need a bass track behind the guitars too.

 

[jsaudio]

yea dude that is FOR SURE this is just rough mix nothing final just still in the writing process
here is the final written version i think gonna start a the mix and getting shit balanced later let me know what all you think needs done. bass is def needed but all i have is an ibanez bass that i think sounds like piss and i am prob gonna get a new studio bass pretty soon so im just gonna wait to track with that.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/9463730/EPIC TRACK AAE.mp3