Watcha saying on my song?(sort of Hard Core)

[looder]

Hey guys! wanted to ask for some feedback on my latest song..
Vocals are not recorded yet but the rest is all here!
Give me your feedback,
enjoy!

https://soundcloud.com/elad-meyuhas/death-of-a-child

 

[looder]

Hey guys, little update with vocals on
https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/Publ...AAQH8D_QNF-1dqNLRdshTV_U2H8xnfsCuJKT3RCVbzgmg

(Though some thing need to be re-recorded)
Hope you have good / bad things to say and what to improve

 

[phoenix18]

like the snare, dont like kick, hate toms. guitars should be a little brighter and clear up bas guitar track a little bit.

 

[looder]

funny thing that you like the snare and didnt liked the kick, I was thinking just the opposite! Well I'll make some changes and will give it a look..

 

[Mago]

You have to watch your timing man...guitars are pretty sloppy.
The mix takes a nice direction tho

Also maybe with vocals it becomes more appearant (the dropbox link gives a 404 btw), but "hardcore" isn't what comes in my mind listening to this...
fwiw at least

 

[Mm1066]

like the snare, dont like kick, hate toms. guitars should be a little brighter and clear up bas guitar track a little bit.

Could you be anymore subjective?

 

[xTomx]

(not even remotely hardcore)

That intro thing is embarrassing.

 

[XxSicRokerxX]

Greetings. Intro is what it is, if you like it, so be it, It made me chuckle though, a little comical. I really like the snare, nice kick although sometimes it sounds weird (3:31). Drums are fine IMO, except for the toms, tuned a little too high. Guitars are okay. As mentioned they're a little sloppy. Cool track though. It has potential.