What can u say about that mix?

[thundercatsdan]

Hello guys! It's my first time here so i want u to say some words about the mix i worked with. I just wrote some of my riffs and tried to make it sound good. I can upload DI's later if u want
My mix:
https://soundcloud.com/denis-tultsev/mixing-practice

 

[prabblerabble]

The guitars are very hollow sounding and the snare doesn't cut through the mix. I would turn down the guitars a bit and scoop some of the mids out. Maybe try adding a snare bus that has a compressor and reverb, I've found that to help me. The song sounds cool though! I think with some adjustments this could sound really good.

 

[thundercatsdan]

I will try. Thank you!

 

[thundercatsdan]

Here i EQ'ed guitar a little but it doesn't changed in mix, and use another reverb on snare and eq too so it has became louder in mix. And i found it cool to add some synth's in 2nd part
https://soundcloud.com/denis-tultsev/mixing-practice_2