- Jun 23, 2004
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Hi, I tried to write a death-metal text. But I don't think I'm good and it's my very first text. I just want to know what you guys think about and what to change.
here it is:
VERSE 1:
seems to be a peaceful place?
just take a look at all the graves
souls of beings once they died
rising up their graves tonight
rest in piece? just a lie
damned to wander
they dont know who they are
for endless times
VERSE 2:
undead figures roam the night
rotten flesh without a mind
seeking to consume your life
transforming you in one of them
we will all die one day
but fear is feeding
for the crows of the night
heralds of eternity
PRE-CHORUS:
bound in tombs
salvation
envious of all
that breathes
CHORUS:
death, life is limited
death, horror of eternity
here it is:
VERSE 1:
seems to be a peaceful place?
just take a look at all the graves
souls of beings once they died
rising up their graves tonight
rest in piece? just a lie
damned to wander
they dont know who they are
for endless times
VERSE 2:
undead figures roam the night
rotten flesh without a mind
seeking to consume your life
transforming you in one of them
we will all die one day
but fear is feeding
for the crows of the night
heralds of eternity
PRE-CHORUS:
bound in tombs
salvation
envious of all
that breathes
CHORUS:
death, life is limited
death, horror of eternity