What do you think? Is this OK? ( Metal from Sweden...)

[nestergaard]

So boyz and gals, what do you think of this little tune? It´s my last creation made just for fun and to test the ReValver VST.
Please comment about the sound and also the songwriting. Or anything else for that matter

 

[nestergaard]

Made a another mix. What do you think? Good or anus?