At very first I thought the mids of the bass was too loud. there´s a quite nice gritty clang in the bass I´d like to hear more, so I´d give that clang
a little boost and cut the mids lower a bit. I´d too add some subs a bit to it, so basically go a little more "V" eq with the bass imo.
I guess you´ve panned all guitars pretty hard? That gives you good separation between guitars and bass (and obviously vocals when you find the guy :}),
but if you have more than one track per side, panning one 100% and one track say 80% would make them seem bigger in the stereofield. I like that,
now there´s too big gap on guitars in the center area imo. Nothing drastic though
I agree with anotherpaul too with pretty much everything. This would definitely benefit some bus-compression glue!
Some crashes seem like they pop up too close, a tad too loud I think..
But there´s definitely potential in there! Cool song too :}
