what do you think?

ok not bad for a demo, guitars and drums are well balanced but the bass is too low in the mix. Also the kick drum is a little boxy mayble cut its low mids
 
Hp at 60 hz and Lp at 300 hz the clean di track, copy a new track of bass so it goes to another channel and add distortion (this is optional) hp something like 200 hz lp at something like 4 khz and mix it very low
 
The guitars are way too loud. I think they could use some low mids as well. The drums have no power to them at all. They are getting drowned out completely.

-Jonathan