Whatcha guys think?

[cdhps]

After a couple weeks of tweakage, heres a new mix for ya!

Tell me what ya think, and what I can improve upon.
Thanks!

http://www.sendspace.com/file/eh8mj6

 

[Element77]

I really dig the music. Vocals are killer. But my take.... Toms pop out too much. set the vocals back a smidge. More click to the kick, and bring it up a slight. And the dead stops, where the hi-hat stops. (about 2:00 and so on) sound alittle unnatural, like someone hit a mute button real quick.) But otherwise, I'd like to hear an awesome version of this (hope that doesn't offend) that would go into my rotation!

 

[cdhps]

Nah man its all good! Im just seeking all feedback I can so I can make the best songs I possibly can at this time. I know with time and experience I'll get better, I've just started mixing stuff for about a week and these are really good friends of mine. Ive been on this forum like craz, up till about 4am and taking what I learn and applying it. Seems to be working :].

In those stop parts (2:000 and such) there are bass slides that might be kickass to bring out.