Would like to be rated, sneap samples inside

[Curse9]

I just mixed this song: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3441300/Rock City.mp3
Please tell me whats right and whats wrong to you ears. Style is kind of heavyrock/metal.

cheers!

 

[Curse9]

puuuuush

 

[reg3n]

i can tell there's a bass on the intro but then it dissappears?or it's buried really low in the mix i dunno, the vox is preety cool tho, not my cup of tea but sounds good!

 

[jauernis]

sounds very very digital. needs more low end and the guitars need to sound more analog. vocals are fantastic!

 

[Curse9]

thx for suggestions! What can I do to fix the bass and make the guitars sound more organic? I have no clue, any tricks?