Would love some help.

[GunnarVE]

I recently started working on my solo project and I'd like to get some opinions.
Whether it's rude or not doesn't matter, I'd just like to know how to improve this.

Obviously it isn't mastered yet, and not fully mixed yet.
And the guitar tones aren't final.

Sooooooooooo, opinions please!

https://www.dropbox.com/s/drsn22sr41ytoq1/CHUPI.mp3

 

[marios.blythe]

start with the kick man,it sounds very ''plastic''