Would very much appreciate som critique!

[hankan190]

Hello!

A while ago I made a real effort to create my first "real" song. You know, the first song that you actualy can stand for that you have made haha. Thing is I have one friend who enjoys metal the rest is mainstreamers so pretty much no one can rly give me any critique so it would be rly nice to get some!

SO I was thinking that maybe atleast one of you guys can give me some points on what to improve and think about and maybe there is something I do good and should keep focusing on?

Well! Here is a link to the song! Enjoy



Best regards from sweden

 

[MetalExplorer]

That was good. Makes me wish songs like these had vocals. As far as the drums go, I think they could have more of a flow, more rhythm. Your riffs are good, I think some power chords would have been good in a song like this.

That was really cool, glad to see people writing original stuff like this.

 

[hankan190]

That makes me really happy to hear!

I actually have vocals to that song A friend and I is starting this kind of "hobby" project, mostly for fun^^. If you thought it was good I can link that and you can sub my youtube. Im not here to promote myself though, I just got happy I recorded the song, then a girl I was humping told me she had a friend who was a metal singer. So I made him sing on this song, thing is it isnt mixxed so it just put over the song and also he isnt a pro at all. But we will develop togheter I hope.

Well, to be honest im not the biggest fan of power chords, ofc that depends on how you use them. But in general I think they are a little uncharastic if you understand? but maybe you mean like middle parts and not only melody after melody after melody?