Yay, people that actually listen to metal to critique my metal mix.

vocals are kinda quiet. overall it doesn't quite feel as "in-your-face" as i'd like.

Any tips on making it more in your face?

And thanks mutant for playing around with it. What mix did you use to make that? I can't really comment since I'm on crappy speakers at work but it sounds a bit boomy, and the vocals are definitely too low.
 
Id recommend muting the vocals. Lmao! Kidding ;)

They may be a tad too quiet on the Mutant mix but I cant really tell with that vocal style.