need some input on these sexy tunes!

[Mindless]

kidding lol... but yeh i made all these songs sometime in jan to march, all improvised. been playing guitar for about a year and a half now and did these using nothing but a line in and a guitar with no D.I box, tones kinda suck but i dont care haha, maybe i can redo all of these better when i get decent D.I and computer, so i needs some input to see if im actully going anywhere with my music, im all ears open, be as nasty as u can be im already a fool on these forums anyways lol.

slow ass metal(was trying to be fast lol): http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1408142/music/Untitled Track 3(1).mp3

Ding Dong(Depressing Slow Song): http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1408142/music/ding dong.mp3

Yuh!: http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1408142/music/yuh.mp3