34 seconds of a good mix? or not?

[Vendo]

Hi,

i´d really like to know if this sounds good to you, or not. Some advice would be great, so i´d improve my mixing/mastering skills.... ( mastering...yeah......more try/fail than actual knowledge).

Sorry for lame riff btw.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/885543/newVersion.wav

Regards

 

[dertillo]

Sounds good to me, very full sound.
Maybe the bassdrum need some more tweaking, its a little
too clicky for my taste.

 

[Vendo]

Thx for your comment!

More comments?

Regards

 

[ericsvizeny]

Pretty good dude, nice spread on the guitars. Real drums I'm assuming? For this style I would trigger them, just tightens everything up.

Eric

 

[Vendo]

Drums are programmed, everything 100 % on the grid

Regards