a cautionary tale

So why didn't you record your 20th play through instead? If you could've improved the performance by actually practicing the song I would probably give this a fair typical "Rate my mix" answer. Sorry dude but this is unlistenable.
 
fair enough. i'll just have another go at it...hell i can probly record vocals and solos on it too. will post later today or tommorow depending on how it goes