A personal post after reading interesting lyric post

Clipse

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Well first day in this forum and I really like it here, after reading
couple of the posts, specificly those based upon lyrics, I thought Id post a song/poem whatever fits u, on the page.

This is a raw view of my thoughts of the world. In very raw format and perhaps bit depressing yet stimilating and truthful.


Death chant, forgotten life
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Whispers been told, about a great death.
Carnage upon earth, shredding human flesh.
People crying out, echoes forgotten.
The damage has been done, no return.

Stay alive, get up from the ground.
The blood would only stain, leave no marks.
Corpses would be rotten, long forgotten.

Stay alive, or be be eaten.
Death chants on, bells of doom.
The devil has come, to collect us all.

We did it to ourself, shed no tear.
We knew what was coming, we just could not hear.
Clean yourself, of misery.
It wont help, death is upon thee.

Staying awake, is all that helps.
Remembering the hate, is all that counts.
Torment and suffering, comes from this.
The thing our savage life, cant resist.
 
Hi as promised, I got another poem up, that I wrote to my girlfriend 2 days ago.

I really hope you like it, as much as she did :-)

This is maybe bit of topic, but since we are all in this specific topic now, I might as well post here :-)

Queen of my underworld
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From relay message, she becometh.
Wonderous soul, she still be.
A gentle touch, she bestoweth on me.
A new life given, from her to me.

Life is bitter, but with her its sweet.
Trusting someone, what more could give.
Longing her, I think of now.
To touch her soul, I hope to reach.

Many years, has past for me.
I think I found, a girl to be.
Her hair witched, with mystical oudor.
And body rich, purified skin.

Her breasts, can not be told.
Her lips, sealed with gold.
A smile, diamant like it is.
Her eyes lash, like a water spring.

Her light, shine upon me.
The only one that I can see.
 
Yes its done.

Another poem, from my thoughts. I hope it makes sense to some. I am being creative in experimenting atm, and hope I dont bore people with some of my poems :-)

I like sharing them, thoughts? comments? anything helps :-)


Sadness within can tell a million things
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Religious castings, over our souls.
We fear no god, we fear our selfs.
Nothing matters, we move alone.
Like hunting dogs, forgotten souls.

Devious things, we cannot see.
Danger among us, treason be.
Denial is hate, hate cant see.
The damage we do, Oh where is he?

I think of life, how it could be.
If I just knew, where I should be.
The crooked world, makes no sense to me.
Devided by hate, yet strong with will.

Common things, make me shiver.
Cold in air, makes me bitter.
Winter nights, I just cant sleep.
Staying awake, for those in need.

I see few days, yet to come.
But no hope in it, no hope to give.
I cant change life, the way it is.
Its how we shaped, our future needs.

Sometimes I stray, away from light.
I think of things, my soul to give.
Thoughts thats worrying, yet pleasing it be.
A darker side, a side of me.

Come alone, and dont look back.
God will come and take us back.
Whoever he is, to you or me.
I still believeth, its the way to be.
 
lol thnx dead end, I just wanted to share with you forum users some of my thoughts.

I take it you did not like it. Thats fine with me :-)

Constructive critisism is allways much more appreciated ;-)
 
clipse, can u change the first message of yours in here to change the title of thread adding sg about poems? maybe we could make it here. I like yours, and want to read more from everybody. Maybe i post some, too.
 
As I grasped a thousand dreams
Memories slipped through my fingers
The outlook of a starving soul
What was once I will never know

What am I to seek?
Does anyone ever seek a soul like mine?
Am I only wasting wasted time?
Insignificant not worth a single dime

Doctors and judges they are so cruel
The girl I loved used legitimate evil
Its a brutal world, a fucking brutal world
be warned.....I'm not good...
 
Den Vengeance said:
As I grasped a thousand dreams
Memories slipped through my fingers
The outlook of a starving soul
What was once I will never know

What am I to seek?
Does anyone ever seek a soul like mine?
Am I only wasting wasted time?
Insignificant not worth a single dime

Doctors and judges they are so cruel
The girl I loved used legitimate evil
Its a brutal world, a fucking brutal world
be warned.....I'm not good...