a poem....... read

[ROY JONES JR]

ok here goes a poem, ok I'll admit:

1- I'm heart-broken, damn st valentine's day
2- yes I know, it is very darktranquillity-esque but I can't deny my influences
3- read #1 and #2








Tonight I'll dream
about confusion and Hope
about the mysteries of your soul
I let the fingers dance
to the tune of distorted instruments
moving around the pale white canvas
giving form and colors
to my neverending anxiety
tonigh I'll dream
about shadows and hell
the somber corner of my mind
where the insane reign supreme
in his claustrophobic words
let the thoughts fly
and the neverending fear be free
there's no use in kissing the wind
why did you opened the little box?
why did you touched my wounds?
I hate you as much as I hate myself
in other words.. I love you, my girl
-EvilHeart

 

[Demonic_Science]

sniff...sniff
that was.....beautiful!!!!!!!!!

 

[ROY JONES JR]

thanks mr demonic
damn love hurts

 

[FatherVic]

damn!!!!!!!!!
love suxxx when you're not given any love back man!!!!
I could only state that love rulzzz
but well I also felt the cesspit view you're facing now!

btw: there's a Poetry thread, you'll find many good poems like that one!!!
so where's malveaux!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[ROY JONES JR]

thanx for the condolences fathervic
yeah I read the entire poetry post, and I really enjoyed a lot of those poems. well i guess love doesn't sucks, it is just as you say, when we love and that love doesn't boomerang into us

 

[ROY JONES JR]

another.......

still hurt and wounded
by the sweet venom of your words
your poisonous tongues
vampire, killer of hope
yet your beauty is eternal
and your touch ethereal
wicked angel, you scare me
with your angelic voice
and your bat-like wings
but I fall......again
you lure me into your trap
I'm a prey in your spider-web
But I won't waste my words
not anymore
I shall make you fall
surrender at my feet
beg for compassion
starve and dismay
forgiveness
pray for lust
I'll let you suffer
ask for love
make the tears come out
of your ravenous eyes
my voice will turn into growls
my tears will become laughs
at your misery
until I find the time to reason
and let my emotions out
offer you my shelter
forgive you
and kiss your lips.....again

-EvilHeart

 

[BillowOfZeal]

those are nice, thanks!.....help keep the poetry thread alive, too.