A song I wrote

[Cythraul]

A lot of metal bands write the most vapid and trite lyrics I've ever had the misfortune of reading. Metal lyrics suck.

 

[Lies and Perfidy]

The following are obviously the greatest lyrics ever written by the hand of man:

No More Pussy Metal

Alright!

Big modern metal bands do nothing but blow
They use too many keyboards and play too slow
Random, meaningless acoustic bits
And we say - ENOUGH OF THAT SHIT

Chorus:
This shit has gotta end, someone has to make a stand, and tell all these poseurs there's changes to be made
Defenestrator's here, to sweep the stage clear, and bring back metal the way it should be played!
NO MORE
PUSSY METAL
NO MORE
PUSSY METAL

Pretentious wimpy crap is the order of the day
The guitarists play like wankers, and the singers all sound gay
They call this bullshit metal, and we can't tell you why
All we can tell you is - THESE POSEURS MUST DIE

Chorus

Kill some poseurs!

[solo]

[group chant]
NO
MORE
PUSSY
METAL
NO
MORE
PUSSY
METAL

Are you sick of eight-minute, two-riff songs?
Do you think that melodeath's been big for way too long?
If you feel like we feel, then join the fight
And for real metal - BANG YOUR HEAD TONIGHT

Chorus

NO!
MORE!
PUSSY!
METAL!

 

[LordFireworm]

Here're the most ambitious lyrics (i.e. took more than 20 minutes to write) for my thrash band:

...

The music for that song is sweet.
GALLOPING FUCKING RULES.

 

[Ultimate_Symphony]

The following are obviously the greatest lyrics ever written by the hand of man:

No More Pussy Metal

Love that one

Here's a song that I wrote back in high school, pretty generic if I say so myself:

Living In A Coma

Lying down like an empty corpse
lifeless and frightened
1000 years pass and desperation still blocks my mind
no one here to save me now
hades personified
living in a coma

Chorus

Why can't I get out of this dream
is this how my life is meant to be?
living in a coma I blame everyone for my loss
living in a coma I curse your name for my pain

Awakened I realize the cruel reality
a true living hell has overcomed my head
I try to succeed against this life long struggle
and then I fall
...again I fall

''repeat chorus''

outro

Shadows haunt your soul
shadows haunt your soul
awakened, now you're lost!

This one is a sketch of a song that I wrote a year ago, pretty shitty since I didn't pay attention to rhyme or how the words work together:

Tears In Heaven

Awakened and dazed
homicide and bloodshed
saddened and bemused
I desperately try to get out of this lacrimal

Chorus

Tears in heaven
The choir of death arises
angels sing the funeral hymn
as I await the news from the abyss

Funeral time has come
the heavens hear my lament
the angels weep as I try to deal with this dilemma

''repeat chorus''

years of famine
years of pain
war explodes, and the innocent suffer

 

[Lies and Perfidy]

Who wrote that and has it actually been recorded to music? If so, have to hear. If not, it should be.

I wrote it, and it's going to be recorded once I get together with DBK and Agathocles of Metal-Archives to do some jamming.

 

[Jean-Pierre]

The following are obviously the greatest lyrics ever written by the hand of man:

No More Pussy Metal

Alright!

Big modern metal bands do nothing but blow
They use too many keyboards and play too slow
Random, meaningless acoustic bits
And we say - ENOUGH OF THAT SHIT

Chorus:
This shit has gotta end, someone has to make a stand, and tell all these poseurs there's changes to be made
Defenestrator's here, to sweep the stage clear, and bring back metal the way it should be played!
NO MORE
PUSSY METAL
NO MORE
PUSSY METAL

Pretentious wimpy crap is the order of the day
The guitarists play like wankers, and the singers all sound gay
They call this bullshit metal, and we can't tell you why
All we can tell you is - THESE POSEURS MUST DIE

Chorus

Kill some poseurs!

[solo]

[group chant]
NO
MORE
PUSSY
METAL
NO
MORE
PUSSY
METAL

Are you sick of eight-minute, two-riff songs?
Do you think that melodeath's been big for way too long?
If you feel like we feel, then join the fight
And for real metal - BANG YOUR HEAD TONIGHT

Chorus

NO!
MORE!
PUSSY!
METAL!

Haha, Holocaust - Metal Mania, anyone?

You'd better get some good fucking music together for that one.

 

[Nico]

This song > yours


Blood Duster - Tittie

3 riffs is all we need
don't need no shitty lead
simple is how we vote
this bit is just one note
can't find a good song name
they all sound the fuckin'same
something clever
something witty
i think i'll call this song tittie!

 

[Profanity]

Your lyics are average but still good. You should try and make them sound more original.

 

[RideForVengance]

I'm not very inspired to do anything, cause I dont really have a band. I'm hoping to jam with this guy who just moved here recently and happens to be just about the only other drummer in town... the one I jam with now... I'm not even gonna start.

But if I did play with a band it'd be THRASH THRASH THRASH!!!

I dont really care about lyrics sounding kinda cliche as long as its a badass Cliche. Much better than being a bullshit Cliche thats trying to be deep.

 

[ShadowOfDeath]

My band is even less of an existence. The fuckers either kicked me out or the band is practically dead. We haven't practiced in 2 months, which was our first productive rehearsal since we got a new guitarist (who sadly cannot stay focused and plays random riffs throughout practice, or just gets drunk) and we were planning to release our first demo soon. As for lyrics I have a lot of stuff written, i'll look for a good one later.

 

[Jean-Pierre]

My band is even less of an existence. The fuckers either kicked me out or the band is practically dead.

Did they die from listening to your solo "work"?

 

[The_Evil_Gentleman]

Slaughterhouse For The Wicked

No permission for the sinners
The wicked one will recieve it all
You never thought you'd be winners
All of you, have to go and fall

In my house, there's your fate
Death it'll set you free
Slowly you'll taste the pain for all the hate
Welcome here just follow me

Enter from the door
And exit with Death

----------------------------
(Chorus)

(Slaughterhouse for the wicked
It's a nice place to be
Just believe me and enter
Just enter
Enter the final house) x 2

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(Breakdown)

Now why are you crying?
Since you never cared about what you did
There's the evil one sighing
And time to cut off your head

In my house, there's your fate
Death it'll set you free
Slowly you'll taste the pain for all the hate
Welcome here just follow me

Time's against you
Taste the pain
You'll have it all

(Chorus)

(Solo)

In my house, there's your fate
Death it'll set you free
Slowly you'll taste the pain for all the hate
Welcome here just follow me

Enter from the door
And exit with DDDDDDEEEEEEAAAAAATTTTTTHHHHH

(Chorus)

 

[Nico]

Did they die from listening to your solo "work"?

*Highfives*