I re-did the drums for this song today, and I'm definitely happier with them, but any other suggestions on how to improve this? It may be too bassy, but my iPod's broken so I can't reference it on other stuff to know one way or the other. Here it is. Also let me know what you think of the song if you want to.
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/7071005/Demo9.mp3
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/7071005/Demo9.mp3