Another one

[zaurus]

I need a little (or not so little) help with this one.
It's not exactly metal but I don't know what it is either.

So here it is:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1199294/I%20Sweep%20the%20Skies%20with%20Fire%2015.x.mp3

 

[zaurus]

no one?

 

[silvermaples]

It sounds like you have some balance issues and some eq'ing on other aspects.

Drums: sound a little lifeless, try some parallel compression

Gtrs: Rythym - sound like they have too much going on in the lower freq, they blend in with the bass but I feel like I can't hear the bass, its just a huge mass.
Lead - was to fizzy for my taste, take some of the highs out and I feel it will sit better in the mix.

Vocals: I feel like there's more than one vocal but its hard to seperate them, play with some compression and panning to see if you can carve out a place for both.

I like the song overall, these are just some things I heard

Cheers
-Cory

 

[zaurus]

Very helpful tips. Just what I needed.
Thanks a lot.