Another radio friendly Pop/Rock song (Female vox)

[88mph]

I see that many Sneapsters are going radio friendly these days. So am I.

I recorded that girl's song yesterday, and made the mix today. What do you think about the mix? What should I do to improve it? This is my first pop/rock mix. So, I need your opinions.

Here's it:
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/819470/pal1.mp3

and have a nice weekend.

 

[derekmoffat]

nice mix. not my cup of tea for the music though

just back off on the low end a bit, thats the only thing i can think of.

im listening to this not on my monitors though, but it seems to have a bit more low end which is kind of drowning out your distorted guitars. GREAT work though! really solid man.

 

[88mph]

We're having a discussion about the vox right now. Do they need to come up a little bit more?

 

[joeymusicguy]

there is so many things wrong with this i dont even know where to begin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WHAT THE FUCK IS SHE SAYING

which is the first reason why its not radio, at all

 

[Mikaël-ange]

Vocal sound really strange for me, I can't understand anything