post your talented writings here on this new thread. see some other peoples' works on my site webspawner.com/users/ryanonline
click on 'Quasi-Poetry', then 'Other Peoples' Works'
click on 'Quasi-Poetry', then 'Other Peoples' Works'
Any talented poetry or quasi-poetry?
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valafar
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"falling down again"
i was lying on the floor when you found me
you took my hand, and we were together one
to feel your warm touch, all over my being
i took my chance and followed you in
and for every move i make
and for every word i tell
and for every pain i felt
all my world seems to end
i just can't help, falling down again
i keep telling to myself; i can see,
i must not depend on you to live
but the more you let me be
the more frail, i always turn out to be
i was lying on the floor when you found me
you took my hand, and we were together one
to feel your warm touch, all over my being
i took my chance and followed you in
and for every move i make
and for every word i tell
and for every pain i felt
all my world seems to end
i just can't help, falling down again
i keep telling to myself; i can see,
i must not depend on you to live
but the more you let me be
the more frail, i always turn out to be
valafar
Member
valafar
Member
ryan1987online said:
hey thanks for your comments...i'm glad you liked that writing.
my avatar? oh it's me.
i always paint my face black-metal style in halloween hehehe
AARRG hail SATAN!!
RuinerXL
Demon of the Fall
Silence
The forest's trees coil and weep.
The sorrow of an ashen sky
Chokes the sun eternally.
Beneath the rain, I can hardly see.
The tears of angels torn from heaven
Adorn the quiet, trellised vines.
Exalted on the throne of silence,
I watch as the leaves turn and fade.
They sink to the marbled ground beneath.
Closing its eyes, the earth around me
Is drowned by the whispering downpour.
The trees reach higher into the heavens...
I have stifled all memory
Of laughter, guilt, and awe.
Still no answer to my call...
The forest's trees coil and weep.
The sorrow of an ashen sky
Chokes the sun eternally.
Beneath the rain, I can hardly see.
The tears of angels torn from heaven
Adorn the quiet, trellised vines.
Exalted on the throne of silence,
I watch as the leaves turn and fade.
They sink to the marbled ground beneath.
Closing its eyes, the earth around me
Is drowned by the whispering downpour.
The trees reach higher into the heavens...
I have stifled all memory
Of laughter, guilt, and awe.
Still no answer to my call...
Demonspell
cheating the polygraph
Halo Of Tears
It was you I saw in the narrow view
Your voice penetrating through
The long dismal shadow of graying trees
I looked between your eyes
Saw the profundity in your clockwise gaze
And that was when I knew
I would never pass into your embrace again.
She crucified her grace and I bear that cross
Through the points of your premature failures
I wrap myself in the scarlet color of the void
Surround myself with the saturnine flames
I know she has not left me untouched
The emerald aura disperses around me
Still I am bewitched by a flickering rage
That rests upon my personal faultlines.
She knows the origin of my fear
The blindness that obscures the reasons
We shared a place in that ritual
Whispering false benedictions
Directing the amorous spectacle
Together we lifted the facade
And found no shreds of mercy
Only a halo of tears lying in wait.
It was you I saw in the narrow view
Your voice penetrating through
The long dismal shadow of graying trees
I looked between your eyes
Saw the profundity in your clockwise gaze
And that was when I knew
I would never pass into your embrace again.
She crucified her grace and I bear that cross
Through the points of your premature failures
I wrap myself in the scarlet color of the void
Surround myself with the saturnine flames
I know she has not left me untouched
The emerald aura disperses around me
Still I am bewitched by a flickering rage
That rests upon my personal faultlines.
She knows the origin of my fear
The blindness that obscures the reasons
We shared a place in that ritual
Whispering false benedictions
Directing the amorous spectacle
Together we lifted the facade
And found no shreds of mercy
Only a halo of tears lying in wait.
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