Anyone see this Lord Red Dragon story?

[El Stormo]

As interesting as it was, I just couldn't read anymore than half.

qft

 

[Kvlt Wench]

Agreed.

And I am vaguely more distubed now.

 

[Anvil]

Yep... Very disgusting.

 

[EricT]

I read some, skimmed some...

LRD, you are a fucked in head.

 

[Lunar Still]

I read the first paragraph and decided it was shit.

 

[derek]

That sounds very much like it was written by a 11yr old with learning difficulties.

 

[mReEtTaIlRsEkD]

That sounds very much like it was written by a 11yr old with learning difficulties.

Not a Brett Easton Ellis fan?

(AM I THE ONLY ONE THAT FUCKING SEES IT?!)

 

[derek]

It's a terrible story that is piss-poorly crafted, regardless of what you can see and nobody else can.

 

[Tongue_Ring]

That sounds very much like it was written by a 11yr old with learning difficulties.

if you're gonna say something like that then you should at least read my other storywrite stories to see if they are written better

 

[Hawng]

No way, its a awsome story, Im in it...I play the bad guy.:Smug::Smug::Smug::Smug:

 

[Hawng]

if you're gonna say something like that then you should at least read my other storywrite stories to see if they are written better

Yeah Derek, read the one about how he and another dude break into a house and rape and kill a 9 year old girl named Trisha.....


http://storywrite.com/story/show/51252