As i lay dying cover rate this

[schuldiner]

Hi I've recorded a try of a as i lay dying cover.
The drum track are taken from a guitar pro file and loaded in superior drummer 2.0, guitars are quad tracked with 7170 and SoloC both boosted with waves tubescreamer Plugin from GTR, all guitar tracks used boogex with chatarsis impulses.

There is 2 try, the first is a bit louder than second, give me yours opinion.

First try:
http://www.mediafire.com/?mwtgndo2mjr

Second try:
http://www.mediafire.com/?zi1jmyfeij2

Edit:

Another try but I think that it's too much compressed.....

http://www.mediafire.com/?1ij1a1gocnn

 

[derfbonker]

I prefer the second attempt.

 

[Rex Rocker]

I think the tone is a bit too smooth for the As I Lay Dying kinda tone. Definitely try giving it more bite, IMO.

The drums sound a bit too dry and clicky if you're going for the As I Lay Dying tone. Otherwise, if you're not really going for that tone, they sound a bit too small compared to the guitars.

 

[schuldiner]

I don't search a tone like As I lay dying, this a test to mix a fast song recorded and produced by myself.
Unfortunately I have work at this at 2:00 am and I have made all in a cheaper hearphone.
When I come back from work I try to give a bigger sound at the mix.
Thanks for the recommendations.