Bath / LYBM liner notes puzzle: The current state of the game

Also maybe rearranging the words in each line may be of use for a coherent sentence. Though it deviates from what vague instructions we have available.

Breathe, See Creation in you
In Voiceless Sleep I speak
The Clear Thoughts Shivering
So great The Humbled Life

I'm really thinking Jason Byron just screwed these numbers up in the first place though! lol
I think this is the closest we got, and it makes sense!