Before The Fall

I really like how the song pushes and pulls. The clean vocals detract from the track, honestly. I like the growls though, they're different.
 
They are all just beginning musicians. And this Oct. they plan on taking leave again and redoing it and recording more. So I imagine this tune will change some and they will get tighter playing. I havent really mixed much of this type of metal.
 
Updated the mix again. Also here are the lyrics and link to the tune

"BEFORE THE FALL"

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=8062655&q=hi

VISIONS OF LIFE BECOMING CLEAR
NAUSEATING HIGH
LITHIUM FILLS THE ROOM
SPINNING OUT OF CONTROL
THE LACK OF AIR TO BREATHE
PANIC ATTACK INCREASES
WOULD THE OTHER SIDE
COMFORT ME AT ALL
THE RUSH OF THE BLADE PIERCES THE DARK

SEE ME THROUGH THE LIGHT
COME TO MY SALVATION
SALVATION

SANCTUARY FOR THE INSANE
BEFORE THE FALL EVERYTHING SO NUMB
SO COLD AND DARK
HELP ME FIND MY WAY THROUGH THIS
LIVING HELL

I CAN’T BREATE AT ALL
HOPES AND DREAMS ARE CRUSHED
ALONE WITH MY SANITY
TAKE THIS HELL
EVER TO CEASE
NAUSEATING NIGHTMARES
VISIONS OF WHAT ONCE WERE
NEVER MORE TO COME
HERE TO LIVE ALONE
INSIDE WITH ALL OF THIS PAIN

SEE ME THROUGH THE LIGHT
COME TO MY SALVATION
SALVATION

I SEE
TO TAKE A LOST ROAD
THAT HAS LED ME
TO A PLACE OF INDESCRIBABLE PAIN
PAIN PAIN PAIN