Black metal dissection style mix - need vocal help

[lanky noob]

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/71178437/Black metal thing.m4a

Here's a quick half hour or so headphone mix i chucked together of a black metal-esque track, but I can't seem to get the vocals right

any help is massively appreciated, with anything, not just the vocals

 

[Pman]

Reeeverb brah. Lots of reverb. Too dry for black metal, the vocals that is

 

[MetalAaron]

I like this. But yeah, more verb!

 

[lanky noob]

More verb then

Any comments on anything else would be appreciated if anyone has any, go on, rip me to shreds!