Blackened Technical Deathcore Mix. (Opinions on the mix and song writing)

[MikeyC]

I recently started a Technical Deathcore solo project and I've written and recorded a demo song. I wanted to go for a more raw brutal death style of mix and a lot of my friends said it sounded too chaotic at some parts so I thought I'd post it here and see what you guys think and what I can do to improve on the mix and the song in general. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vL4-DwylUik