Brand new to forums. Need criticism

[ghxstwiththemxst]

Hey guys, my name is Kevin and I'm 19 years old. I was just looking for some criticism on my first recording done in my room. Everything is real (not a big fan of replacing). The song that is called "2009 In Retrospect", and I also mastered it myself. Feedback is much appreciated!

www.myspace.com/oddonesoutny

 

[ghxstwiththemxst]

Woops, forgot to mention that I ran the beginning through Izotope's vinyl plugin to make it sound like garbage on purpose

 

[I_Am_The_Fury]

Doesn't sound bad for that style.

 

[ghxstwiththemxst]

any tips?