Can I get some feedback on this 8-string mix?

[coreysMonster]

I'm once again struggling with balancing the bass guitar sound in a mix with an 8-string song. My headphones make it seem like there's hardly any bass there, and my speakers make the bass seem a little overbearing. How does it sound on other people's speakers? Any other criticisms for the mix of this song so far?

https://soundcloud.com/kalium/miasma-quick-instrumental-mix

Thanks!

 

[coreysMonster]

Redid the mix and turned out this: https://soundcloud.com/kalium/miasma-2-0-mix

Cut out unwanted low frequencies, added more upper mids to the guitar, raised the overall levels and fiddled with the bass tone.