Can we post opeth inspired lyrics......???

[Psycroptipath]

The mustache, it gallantly waved
In the lights from my spot near the stage
From emotion, I teared
and I chugged my beer
Hey, Lopez's shit got me pretty blazed.

hahahaha if i didn't think it would get deleted i'd make an opeth inspired limerick thread! someone do it.

 

[cthulufhtagn]

how about opeth haikus?

swedish songwriter
expressing his inner pain
through moustachery

 

[WhiteBeastofWotan]

Well its 3 in teh mornign Im havin a hard time sleeping......havent seen mom in liek 3 years man.,.....really miss my folks back home.....so here is something....well a scenario where a sinner like me dies and what happens to him after his passing...Ill try to explain each Stanza as I go.......!!!

Mourner's Lament (dying a lonely and poor death no money for evne afuneral)
Hallowed my passing
porcelain tear
Engraved my resting
entwined in cloaks
tapestry cant afford
Sins Ive gained
Too many to accord

Seared earth
it Cracks my skin (The process of decaying)
vigor withers
weakens my shins
Madrigal sung
but still resonates
Crestfallen
allude my pain

Overture played
Judgment i face
Angels brighten (Im being resurected to be taken to GOD)
My blackend grave
Eerie and pale
My aura it fades
Sepulchral mound
I cannot escape

Epitaph instructs
Pray for dweller
With your faith (I asked for prayers, none but mother answered
You shall confer
My other hope
my Mother's Prayer
She could always
Dispel my Fears

celestial luminance
Before my face (I face god, empty handed : but my Mother I always pleased)
My fortunes fade
Wealth I gathered
lured me away
From the one thing
I could not forsake

Enlightened face
Reaches for me ( Mother's prayer comes through and saves me from Hellfire
My loathsome hold
clutches for Him
Excused and rescued
Rejoiced I feel
My Mother's prayers
Dispel my fears.


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I gues it could still use some work....it doenst have an fixed rhyming pattern......every stanza utilizes a differnt scheme..........i jsu tfelt liek venting...adn writing something for my Gracious and looving mother.........god bless us all.....i dont knwo if it made sense to you guys.....but Im contenet after writing thing.......Keep truckin fellas......!!!!......PEACE OUT

Dont you mean
Morners Lametn (dying a lonely...and poor death...!!!....) no money for evne afuneral)
Halwoed mi passing....!!!....
porslin teer
Ingraived...!!... my risting
Inwtined in clokes
tappestrey... cant aford
Sins Ive gained!!!...
To many...!!.. to ocord

Seered earht...!!...
it Cracks my skin (The process of decaying)
vigro withsr
wekeens ym shins
Mardigol sunng
butt stil rseonpates
Crestfalen
aloode my pane

Overtere plade
Jujmetn i face
Angls brigthen
My blackecdn grave
Erie adn pael
My aura it fades
Sepulchral mound
I cannot escape

Etc...

PEAC EOUT!!!!....

 

[waz416c]

hahaha......wolftribe......well.......when needed I can also typw without any spelling mistakes....hence the lyrics and thsi post......hahaha.........hope u liked'em......Keep rockin....!!!...PEAC EOUT

 

[Jon Snow]

Dont you mean
Morners Lametn (dying a lonely...and poor death...!!!....) no money for evne afuneral)
Halwoed mi passing....!!!....
porslin teer
Ingraived...!!... my risting
Inwtined in clokes
tappestrey... cant aford
Sins Ive gained!!!...
To many...!!.. to ocord

Seered earht...!!...
it Cracks my skin (The process of decaying)
vigro withsr
wekeens ym shins
Mardigol sunng
butt stil rseonpates
Crestfalen
aloode my pane

Overtere plade
Jujmetn i face
Angls brigthen
My blackecdn grave
Erie adn pael
My aura it fades
Sepulchral mound
I cannot escape

Etc...

PEAC EOUT!!!!....

LOL. Brilliantly translated back to the native tongue of Waz.

 

[Aaron A.]

hahaha......wolftribe......well.......when needed I can also typw without any spelling mistakes....hence the lyrics and thsi post......hahaha.........hope u liked'em......Keep rockin....!!!...PEAC EOUT

Why don't you type well, from now on? We'll be impressed.

 

[deliverance]

hahahaha if i didn't think it would get deleted i'd make an opeth inspired limerick thread! someone do it.

there was a sweet opeth haiku thread, but it was deleted


i sold my soul to Waz for a bag of black pepperjack doritos.

 

[Kenneth R.]

moustachery


"weakens my shins"

this thread is getting 5 stars.

 

[WhiteBeastofWotan]

when i first read "weaken my shins" i thought it said shits...

Made me think of getting the shits

 

[cthulufhtagn]

n00b haiku:

omgz0r d00d
wtf is up wif da
story from still life!??!?!?