You may have heard this song in the RMM section, but I was hoping to be able to whore out some comments off this place as well 
we've posted a song from our upcoming demo to our Myspace page, check it out... It's melodic death metal.
http://www.myspace.com/chaotechband
The song has been received pretty well thus far by the public (although it's hard to find people who comment, the people who do comment have liked it... silent acceptance?) and I just wanted to show it to you guys. A few people said the breakdowns are horrible
but I never consciously wrote any. That's why we're going to make t-shirts at some point, with our logo in the front and the text "HORRIBLE BREAKDOWNS" in the back.
no one will understand it, but that's not the point.
The mix of course isn't perfect, but I think it's good considering it's my first "real" mix. The song also has been composed and arranged by me, and I wrote the lyrics as well. The other songs in the demo are written by our bassist.
We're planning to take some demo promo shots with the help of a friend, putting the demo out to every possible venue and label, etc... wish us luck!
Tell me what you think and become a friend if you like it
we've posted a song from our upcoming demo to our Myspace page, check it out... It's melodic death metal.
http://www.myspace.com/chaotechband
The song has been received pretty well thus far by the public (although it's hard to find people who comment, the people who do comment have liked it... silent acceptance?) and I just wanted to show it to you guys. A few people said the breakdowns are horrible
but I never consciously wrote any. That's why we're going to make t-shirts at some point, with our logo in the front and the text "HORRIBLE BREAKDOWNS" in the back.
no one will understand it, but that's not the point.The mix of course isn't perfect, but I think it's good considering it's my first "real" mix. The song also has been composed and arranged by me, and I wrote the lyrics as well. The other songs in the demo are written by our bassist.
We're planning to take some demo promo shots with the help of a friend, putting the demo out to every possible venue and label, etc... wish us luck!
Tell me what you think and become a friend if you like it

What'd you use for the synths? One thing though - while I like the note choice for the solos, I feel like they sound a bit...strained, like you and/or the other guitarist were playing just a bit beyond your means (and the vibrato could use some work); man these are some bitchin' riffs and grooves though!