- Jul 23, 2007
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Hey,
I'm not an english language native, and I'm looking for sympathic and talentuous metal maniacs to do corrections and give the true feeling to the songs I wrote.
My band plays in France, we're going to record our songs (they will be free downloadable on our site, music belong to human kind, and has to be shared) but the lyrics are writen by us the best we can, and I search someones to correct them and make them excellent.
This is one we are going to record soon :
THE WOUND
Haunted, every night
By the fear, deep inside
Help me to find the exit
Every dream becomes a nightmare
I'll never find peace of mind
Until the end of your life
My fate is sealed to your demise
To live free you must die !
If it's not you, it shall be me
I cannot conceive, we're both alive
Do you realise, you broke my life
No matter I'm unwise, I wish you die
Cry for my mercy, I'm not almighty
I cannot control me, something acts to set me free
My wound is healed now you are dead
Thanks for every answer.
I'm not an english language native, and I'm looking for sympathic and talentuous metal maniacs to do corrections and give the true feeling to the songs I wrote.
My band plays in France, we're going to record our songs (they will be free downloadable on our site, music belong to human kind, and has to be shared) but the lyrics are writen by us the best we can, and I search someones to correct them and make them excellent.
This is one we are going to record soon :
THE WOUND
Haunted, every night
By the fear, deep inside
Help me to find the exit
Every dream becomes a nightmare
I'll never find peace of mind
Until the end of your life
My fate is sealed to your demise
To live free you must die !
If it's not you, it shall be me
I cannot conceive, we're both alive
Do you realise, you broke my life
No matter I'm unwise, I wish you die
Cry for my mercy, I'm not almighty
I cannot control me, something acts to set me free
My wound is healed now you are dead
Thanks for every answer.