Crit a noob-ish recording , feedback greatly appreciated

[professorlamp]

So i'm fairly new to recording (about 6 months ish) and would just like some crits on my newest song, so far it has no vocals they haven't been added yet ,and also the overall volume is fairly low , those are the 2 things i dont want critted anything else feel free


Also i wont be able to get back to questions because im posting this right before my lectures start.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2872916/IYAH-05.mp3

 

[poidaobi]

Good evening Good Sir,

Thankyou for your clip. We have a seperate sub forum where people can post their clips for a review. Please refer to the Rate My Mix Subforum. I'll assume you didn't see that.

Good Luck and bless your family.

Cheers
Peter

 

[PostMortem1666]

Drums sound obviously like EZDrummer. Guitars need to be at least double tracked and panned Hard L and R.

I can't hear the kick as well and the cymbals are pretty quiet. Some cool writing though!