crit my film music mix!

[professorlamp]

drums are still in progress (they sound mleh and the velocities are the same ((not cool))
But other than that I'm welcome to crits and would like some advice on what to improve and all that jazz..


http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2872916/for jack.mp3

edit: also forgot to mention that the drums randomly cut out , for some reason i thought i finished them, obviously i forgot to save orrr I'm going crazy

 

[professorlamp]

It dawned on me that having a low post count sucks as noone crits anything

 

[updog]

Was expecting more synth in it... Actually, I thought the guitar in the beginning of the part was a distant piano but it turned out to be another guitar. There's too much compression on the drums, the cymbals were kind of wobbly sounding. But overall at times I could imagine that in a soundtrack for something

 

[professorlamp]

fucksakeee
i HATE AD! why by default does it feel the need to compress OH's, i forget everytime
the drums are only guide ones for while i was laying the low endzzz so im gonna redo them soon.

but thank yee for yee kind words sir