crit this (best so far :D )

[professorlamp]

Just need some crits on this, as it's going up on my page to show people that want to hear my stuff.So really it has to be decent quality.
There will be vocals but I'm awaiting them as we speak

so anyway , the more crit the better

old version: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2872916/newwwer (m).mp3
newest version (less reverb,removed woof from guitars,EQ'd the verb and other stuff) : http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2872916/new...edone snare verb and less woof and louder.mp3

 

[sprack]

Bring the guitars forward. Sounds like its at the back of a warehouse.

 

[chrisrivalry]

snare verb needs to come down a bunch, actually all of the verb need sto come down. that will serve you well in bringing more punch to the track and cleaning up all the muddy low end as well.

 

[CAlexanderParra]

Sounds like the whole mix is severely low passed at 4k. Bring up the high end!

 

[Nauru]

Tighter playing and less reverb will do wonders for you.

 

[drdan]

I think everything is over verbed. The leads sound really weird and the rhythms are a bit far away, probably because they have too much reverb and are maybe slightly quiet. Overall, definitely getting there.

 

[HandsOfDespair]

Way too much reverb, it feels like it's a live recording, in a bad way

I feel it could sound great though, just put a lot less reverb

 

[professorlamp]

Added a newer revision to it, less verb on everything apart from the one snare hit in the middle

 

[sprack]

Everything else sounds much better, lead guitar is still way in back.

 

[professorlamp]

Yet another one up.