Crit my vocals in this mix

[professorlamp]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2872916/IYAH-06 vocals.mp3



Just need a few pointers really to get me in the right direction , any advise?

 

[ShellBlast]

You're pretty much off pitch the entire time. Get a keyboard, play the pitch, and sing over it until you can do it without the keyboard. It might take awhile.

 

[professorlamp]

I cant hear me being out of pitch but I will trust you, aside from that are there any other things production wise ?