Critique the fuck out of this mix **Stems included**

[scoreking81]

Mix of "You call that a knife? this is a knife" by Capture the Crown. Not really a fan of the song but just wanted to do some mixing practice. What can i do to make this mix better? Been really struggling pushing my mixes over the amateur level. any help is appreciated.

Here's my mix
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/93288441/word.mp3


and these are the raws (not recorded by me)
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/45215030/ctc raw.zip

 

[XxSicRokerxX]

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/19917325/song.mp3

 

[marios.blythe]

@XxSicRokerxX what u used for guitar ? great tone!

 

[oroinvictus]

Not too bad! Drums sound super robotic, some humanization could go a long way. Cymbals sound very washy, all I hear is sibilance and no tone from them.

 

[XxSicRokerxX]

@XxSicRokerxX what u used for guitar ? great tone!

Glad you liked it, but, after listening w/ headphones, changes can be made. All it is, is TH2, TubeNine (ts808), Heavy 51(5150) and s-preshigh. Along w some C4 and EQ.

I basically did the whole project again here. https://dl.dropbox.com/u/19917325/song2.mp3

but this time w x30.

and to the op, as mentioned before, those overheads needs to be fixed. Other than that, sounds pretty good, maybe some more humanization mine sound kinda robotic as well.

 

[Harley Barley]

Not too bad! Drums sound super robotic, some humanization could go a long way. Cymbals sound very washy, all I hear is sibilance and no tone from them.

yeah thats what i heard too

 

[MisSigsFan]

Drums sound very compressed. Like, more than need be.

 

[marios.blythe]

can you please give me a tempo map? is any changes made? XxSicRokerxX great mix!