Crits on this

[EnjoiTrent]

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/68110173/A New Beginning Shorelines (2).mp3

This is a band I recorded recently, I just want to know what you guys suggest I do to improve this mix.
Drums are live cymbals with a reinforcement sample behind his china, because his didn't have a lot of attack, and completely sampled shells. Bass is Zombass, but their going to record live bass once they put new strings on their bass. Tell me what you think!

 

[tmitchell33]

Better than your last, you are improving really quickly. I would have to say the same thing about this mix as the others though, really scooped - nothing between 200 - 900Hz - this gap makes the guitars harsh. The snare tone is good just watch some of the fills. I would like to hear some dimension on the synth / piano - a decent sound concert hall to exaggerate the size as well as some velocity work on the piano intro - I like it but it's just a little clinical. The vox need a little more processing, they sound a little rough but strangely enough improve towards the end of the song. Keep us posted with new revisions of this mix

 

[EnjoiTrent]

https://www.dropbox.com/s/cezkzj8k75o66ab/A New Beginning (3).mp3
Did a little with the cleans and a lot with the drums. Completely different snare and kick. I wanted them not to sound so boxy. I'm gonna work on the screams next, and then final tuning on the singing.