Dance/Hardcore mix-criticize please!

[DJdisaster]

EDIT: new mixx https://dl.dropbox.com/u/10573333/are you alone redo.mp3

quick mix
wrote the song yesterday and finished recording it yesterday, just dabbling
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/10573333/are you alone.mp3

tried messing with some glitches
i dont really know what im doing with those haha
and fooled around with some synths

so opinions please

 

[DJdisaster]

=O

 

[gabriel g.]

this is pumping like hell
Damn and that glitches are terrible....

sorry

 

[gabriel g.]

I like them as a effect but you went totaly over board with them

 

[ahjteam]

pumping hard, too much highs, there is a gap in the middle of the stereo image, and no bass guitar?

 

[AerialThesis]

holy shit, this mix needs some mid, and it needs to stop pumping. but that high-end by the way feels very relaxing and unstressfull. I like it.

 

[DJdisaster]

i tried to fix the pumping problem i think its better haha, tell me if you stilll hear it
i also added bass so tell me if some of the problems or are fixed or if i need to tweek it some more
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/10573333/are you alone redo.mp3

thank you for tha help so far =]

 

[DJdisaster]

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[DJdisaster]

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[DJdisaster]

helllp