deathgrind - need your opinion on the low end of this mix

[forsaker]

hell-o!
I'm in the process of mixing a death/grind band. Since my room is untreated I'm not sure about the low end of my mixes. Can you help me and check it in your rooms? Any other suggestions are welcome, of course. I know that the drums still need to be automated. Vocals will be added soon.
thx in advance!

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/106229499/br/brmix1.mp3

 

[NecroDM]

The link is dead mate

 

[forsaker]

Sorry, https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/106229499/br/brmix1.mp3

 

[forsaker]

A new version: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/106229499/br/Rmix2.mp3

 

[NecroDM]

On the 2nd mix, there seems to be something wrong with the guitar on the left, it may be too quiet or maybe the panning isn't right.
Also the drums sound very mechanical, maybe you should try to humanize them a bit.

 

[forsaker]

Thx. I've corrected it. New versions, with vocals this time:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/106229499/br/br/v1.mp3
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/106229499/br/br/v2.mp3
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/106229499/br/br/v3.mp3
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/106229499/br/br/v4.mp3

 

[forsaker]

...and this one: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/106229499/br/br/v5.mp3 (probably the best one)

 

[forsaker]

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/106229499/br/br/v666_2.mp3

 

[Deadstar]

i've just listened to the last mix but it seems there's no bass at all if that helps

 

[forsaker]

Ok, thx. I've corrected it: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/106229499/br/br/v666_3.mp3 Is it better now?

 

[forsaker]

I've just ended up with something like this: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/106229499/br/br/v777.mp3 Any opinions? Thx in advance.

 

[forsaker]

anyone?