Directions To Servants mix. Crit please!

[PlotxHead4L]

Hey guys, im still relatively new here. But I'd like to present a very rough mix I did of Villains/Yüth song "Directions to Servants" I found the overheads, shells, and guitar online, I however tracked the bass myself. The song itself isn't done being edited. But I noticed my mix is lacking punch and clarity, and this is my first TRUE mixing project. So please be as honest as you can. I'm only here to learn. https://www.dropbox.com/s/gddkkoba1utkixz/Directions To Servants v1.mp3?dl=0


For guitar I'm using Bias with LeCab, and same goes for bass. Once again, be real with me! Just don't be ruthless.

 

[Adam_V]

Man you have a probleme with your drum, it is not in rhythm :/

 

[PlotxHead4L]

Man you have a probleme with your drum, it is not in rhythm :/

Yea, the shells I found have a lot of out of place hits, though I think the source I found said something about a tempo mapping, but I couldn't find it. I'm almost to the point I might just make my own. But outside of that, anything else standing out to you?

 

[PlotxHead4L]

Bump :/