Does this mix feel muddy to anyone else?

[Virgil.]

Does this mix sound muddy to anyone else? I've been testing out some new things and just wanted to do this quick test mix...
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5218029/Tunage6_test.mp3

Updated:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5218029/Tunage6_test2.mp3 Does this one sound better?