feedback on mix/master?

[OpenWound]

was going through some old projects when i saw an old song i wrote as a project for school, did the last finish touch on it.
Would apreciate all kinds of feedback

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1575659/Without the Sun - The Fall3.mp3

updated version: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1575659/Without the Sun - The Fall4.mp3

 

[fuimjb]

that opening riff is awesom and the mix for it is perfect. vocals kinda kill it. not mix wise but song wise. i like it though sounds good.

 

[OpenWound]

ah thanks man! ^^ did change some little things i the mix/master.. posted an updated version also..
ok, yea the song was written in short time and i didn't get the screamer i usally use when recording,
it's not my preference of screams neceserily, but he did a good job, we spent a couple of hours in
the studio, and he nailed the takes quite good

 

[OpenWound]

finished the mix just now, http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1575659/The Fall8.mp3
did some changes to the guitar sound and cleand up freq. @ bass and the kick