Feedback on my arrangment

[Loren Littlejohn]

Since this failed in the rate my shit forum (thanks n00bs).
Anything sound stupid? This isn't mixed yet, I'm wondering if anything else should be thrown in.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/453334/Sybreed remix.mp3

 

[guitarguru777]

The arrangement is great really dig it. Its got a very VNV Nation meets NIN kinda thing going on. I really dig it. Great Melody

Maybe go a little less intricate on the hats in the breakdown, try 8ths instead of 16th. I really dig the bridge and chorus though!

Cant wait to hear the final product!

 

[Loren Littlejohn]

Thanks man, I really dig this Sybreed song and am pretty glad they decided to release the stems (even though that was a cluster fuck... ).